Writing your story.    Successful authors don’t think of themselves as narrators rather they see things through the eyes of the principal character. I have just rewritten a chapter of my book The Ancient Forest, as I realised is was speaking as if I were seeing from the height of the trees in the forest. I was trying to wind up the plot with everyone living happily ever after. Then I came down to earth and imagined myself as the Landlord of the Inn. It was a very different chapter to end my book. Now it is complete but I must have it edited. Some of the chapters were written months apart.  Talk though the P.C.